Fantasy & Science Fiction, personal rejection:
Dear Kalin and Velichka,
Thank you for giving me a chance to read "Enchantment." I thought this was a superb translation -- the prose was smooth and elegant, and exactly what I look for in any story for F&SF. The length of this story was also perfect -- it's a good size to fit in the magazine, but I have a hard time finding stories in this range. I also liked the intelligence and the thoughtful themes of this story. I thought the line "And what is art but letting someone's mighty will triumph upon others?" was one of the smartest observations I have read recently.
With all that said, I didn't love this piece. While I could see what the story-within-a-story section, where Matyo reads to Martha, on pages 3-6, were doing, I didn't find the parable engaging and it bounced me out of the story early on. Even when I kept on reading, I didn't feel strongly engaged with Martha, Matev, or Alexander as people, which meant the themes didn't resonate with me as strongly as I think they needed to.
Overall, while there is a lot here that I liked and that I look for, this specific story didn't quite win me over and I'm going to pass on it for F&SF. I wish you best of luck finding the right market for it. I appreciate your continued interest in F&SF and would be very interested in seeing more work by Velichka Nastradinova if I thought it might balance these kinds of intelligent themes and insights with characters who seem to have more layers to them.
Best regards,
Charlie
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C.C. Finlay, Editor
Fantasy & Science Fiction
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